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Chapter 7: Sophia's Photoshoot Seduction - Part 3

"You sure are pretty," Andre said, folding the blanket around her shoulders, letting his hands skim across her breasts as he closed it in front of her.


"Thank you," Sophia said demurely. The three of them are still seated in the main cabin. She has spent the last hour or so sipping champagne, listening to their tall tales about the wide going-ons of the modeling world. As she let slip she was feeling a bit chilly, Andre had stepped into his cabin to bring her a blanket even as Ashley cozied up alongside her on the couch. She could feel a warm fuzzy feeling, of being loved and cared for by the two kind souls with her. Suddenly, she felt a gush of love towards the two blondes who had been so kind towards her the last few days, so much love it feels as if it’s overflowing, and needs to be expressed in one way or another before it explodes.

Looking at her glassy eyes and slightly opened, pouting lips, Ashley judged that the alcohol is finally starting to take effect. The hard work he had put in to earn her trust, the little physical touches, seduction and tantalizing efforts at foreplay had steered her into the right mood for this moment. He could feel his excitement rapidly growing as he looked at his tasty little treat.

Judging that the moment has come, Ashley wrapped his arms around her, briskly rubbing her arms and pressing his body against hers. Sophia began to warm up, but it was a warmth that grew from the inside. Ashley was heating up more than her skin.


"Feeling any warmer?" Andre asked, standing in front of her, watching Ashley's active hands and body.


"Definitely! Ashley is simply lovely and knows what’s she’s doing."


"He tries hard, but I really shouldn't let him do all the work," Andre said with a smirk, his hands folded across chest.


Fuzzy from the alcohol, it took her a moment before Sophia realized what Andre said. He? Isn’t Ashley a ‘she’? With Ashley’s body pressed so closely against her, she reached down with her hand and was shocked to discover a massive erection at his crotch.

Ashley's hands quickly found their way under the blanket to rub her breasts. He swiftly bared her nipples for his circling palms, fingering them erect with arousal.


"Okay, guys. I'm warm now, that’s enough," Sophia said. She saw where this was leading and suddenly thought about Shaiful. In the six months they had been together, she had never even looked at anyone else. They hadn't really made a final commitment to each other yet; it was just one of those things that were understood would happen with time.


"Me too love," Ashley whispered huskily into her ears. "In fact, I’m hot… For you!”

Ashley spun her around and kissed her mouth before she could muster a protest. His tongue quickly darted between her lips and stroked her mouth, drawing her into the kiss, dancing with and against her tongue, sometimes forcefully, sometimes gently, sometimes fast, sometimes slow. Sophia could feel her control slipping. Her thoughts of Shaiful slipping away now as Ashley’s tongue and lips, fingers and palms played with her mouth and nipples, sending pleasurable jolts through her body. She could still remember her hands no, his hands the other night, the sensual stroking of her back and butt building a fire between her legs. Suddenly, Ashley pushed forward, pressing her down against the couch. Their hips were pasted together, the excited bulge in his jeans pressing against her hot pussy. She could feel a hot wetness dribbling from between her legs, she has never experienced a makeout session so exciting before! Mustering one last attempt to stop things before they go too far, she pushed against his chest.


"Slow down!" she gasped. "That hurts. I’'m not going anywhere you know." Fuck! That was not what she had wanted to say. She wanted to tell him to stop. She wanted to tell them about Shaiful. They had been so kind to her, surely they will understand. But what came out was something else altogether. It’s like her mouth had a mind of its own!

Ashley and Andre exchanged a look and then started to take off their clothes. Sophia watched them, wondering if Shaiful would understand if he found out, knowing she was not going to be able to stop what was going to happen soon. She isn’t even sure if she wants to stop what is going to happen soon. The combination of the alcohol and the erotic atmosphere was taking over her brain, taking away her ability to reason logically and morally.

Waiting fearfully, the blanket still wrapped awkwardly around her waist while both her nipples stood hard and erect, exposed to the cool night air, Sophia gazed at Ashley's slim body. He had a swimmer's build, his nipples pink against his smooth pale chest. His legs were waxed cleanly, and she discovered his crotch was, too, when his briefs went flying to the floor. His erection was standing proudly, an ivory cock, slim, smooth and long, the cockhead flaring wide at its end, his testicles big and hanging loosely in his balls sac.

Sophia then turned her attention to Andre. His body was slim, but wider in the shoulders, with lean muscles flexing under his pale white skin. His legs were hairy but just like Ashley, his crotch was waxed and hairless, the proud twin of Ashley’s erection slowly coming to life, lifting its circumcised head to stare at Sophia.

Sophia no longer feels the cold, her attention focused solely on the two men standing before her. Twin ivory cocks eagerly straining to explore the secret crevices of her body. As if her subconscious had made a decision, Sophia stood, letting the blanket fall to the floor. She first kissed Ashley, then Andre, enjoying the familiar yet different taste of their mouths. At the same time, she reached down with her hands and gripped a hard cock in each hand, gently stroking the shafts. Leaning back slightly, she gave them a sad smile, she still doesn’t understand why she is behaving like this, but she is determined that she will fuck the two of them on a bed, and not on the saloon floor like a slut.

Leading them by their cocks, the trio entered the main stateroom, Andre’s room. Sophia loosened her grip on their cocks and crawled onto the double bed. She could feel her body heating up quickly as they walked the length of the passage. Her power and control over the two of them a powerful boost to her libido. Turning on her back, leaning against the pillows, she spread her legs, her fingers spreading the lips of her pussy apart as she beckoned the twins with a nod, her desire was growing and she wondered whose hard cock will be the first to fill her cunt.
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Re: Entrapment

For a moment had thought Ashley was she and the typo was confusing me... as mentioned earlier great development. Cheers!
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For a moment had thought Ashley was she and the typo was confusing me... as mentioned earlier great development. Cheers!
No worries. I did it on purpose to try to convey the idea from Sophia’s viewpoint, she’s female, while the twins knew all along ‘she’ is actually a ‘he’ because that’s the trick they use. A woman is usually likely more likely to trust another woman after all.

I did try to leave clues, like how Ashley’s hands are large and rough like a man’s, and how Ashley is very tall...

Hopefully that’s not too confusing and made the story less enjoyable :-/
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Very good story here, support for more!
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Thanks for sharing this nice story TS, look forward to your next updates.
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Chapter 8: Sophia's Photoshoot Seduction - Part 4

But it was a question she would have to wait to find out as both men knelt on the bed, the both of them angling their cockhead next to her face. She didn't know which dick to go for first. Since Ashley had fooled her all along, she decided to punish him by reaching out for Andre’s shaft and pulling him into her mouth. Her other hand wrapped around Ashley's pulsing cockmeat to keep him happy while she savored the tasty feel of Andre's hard rod.


But Ashley was not to be denied. He was the one who did most of the hard work, leading her along, seducing her, setting up all the little openings. He will be rewarded for his work damn it! He pulled her mouth off Andre's cock, turning her head to face his thumping penis. He angled his cockhead towards her mouth and pushed forward.


Sophia saw the drops of pre-cum glistening on his big cockhead just before Ashley shoved his dick into her mouth. Her tongue felt the smooth length of his shaft as it glided towards the back of her mouth. Everything happened so quickly, she barely had time to register what has happened. As Ashley drew his cock backward, Sophia hurriedly took a deep breath before he can stuff his cock into her mouth again.

Shifting his body around, Ashley presses his groin into Sophia’s face like a man driven. His hips pumped as he placed his arms on both sides of Sophia’s body. His balls slapping against her forehead, each time he worked his cock down her throat. Sophia could barely breathe. She placed both her hands against Ashley’s hips, using them to soften his thrusts as he fucked her mouth. She desperately needs some arousing foreplay, some form of pleasure to feel good instead of this suffocating nightmare but Ashley seemed determined to fuck her face until he climax.


Andre wasn’t too satisfied with Ashley’s maneuvering of course. From his perspective, the beautiful model was focusing all her attention on pleasuring his twin, the both of them not paying him any attention at all.

Since neither of them appeared to be willing to accommodate him, he decided to look for his own entertainment. The rest of Sophia’s olive-skinned luscious lewd body was available. Smiling to himself, he moved down the bed, putting his mouth onto Sophia’s pussy lips and started sucking. His tongue flicking against her clit every now and then as he reached up with his large, callused hands to squeeze her beautiful milk globes, fingering her hard nipples at the same time.

Unbeknownst to Andre, his stimulation of Sophia’s pussy, clits, tits, and nipples were just what she needed. The sudden stimulation drove her into a frenzy, she started sucking the hard cock in her mouth instead of focusing on relaxing her mouth and throat to catch a breath. The attack on her sensitive nipples and clit ignited the embers of passion that had been slowly stoked by Ashley over the last few days. She squeezed her thighs together, hoping that Andre can push his rough tongue deeper and faster into her feverish cunt.

Andre felt the sudden pressure around his head and he knew he succeeded in getting Sophia’s attention. Laughing to himself in his mind, he redoubled his efforts, sliding his hands back so he can push his fingers into Sophia’s desperately needy pussy even as another hand keeps her cunt spread open. His tongue focused its frenzied flicking of her clits, suckling her little blood-engorged pleasure bead every now and then.

Ashley could feel his cock deep in Sophia’s throat, it’s every nook and cranny rubbing against his sensitive cockhead each time he rammed his meat into her mouth. The lovely sensation of her getting into the action, sucking his dick as he fucked her mouth intensified his pleasure and within minutes, he could feel a quivering trembling coming from deep within his loins as he came explosively, spewing his hot sperm deep down into her throat.

The sudden sensation of hot sperm hitting the back of throat made Sophia retch instinctively, however, with Ashley’s cockmeat still stuffed deep in her throat, she could do little but choke in pain. The twin sensations of painful suffocation and the delicious signals from her pussy combined in her head to create a magical explosion, it was the final trigger for her to come as she wrapped her lovely long legs around Andre’s head, squeezing him, holding his head tightly, holding him in place as she convulsed wildly, just like how his twin Ashley is holding her head tightly, choking her with his cum. Her orgasm washed over her like a tsunami wave, radiating outwards from the nerve center of her cunt. She could feel her hot wet fluids as they gushed out from her cunt, washing over Andre’s face. Her frenzied buckling meant that she could feel Andre’s rough features rubbing against even more parts of her sensitive pussy, sending even more pleasure through her even as she is feeling light-headed from the lack of air.

Finally sated, Ashley finally withdrew his softening cock from Sophia’s mouth, a trickle of sperm dribbling from her mouth. And not a moment too soon either as she suddenly turned her face to the left and coughed, spewing globs of sperm from her mouth and nose as she gasped for breath.

Andre took advantage of her distraction to quickly pull Sophia’s legs apart. Ashley might be the first to fill her mouth with his cum, but he will be the first to fill her pussy with his seed. He wriggled his hips to wedge his cockhead into her slit, enjoying the tight hot warmth of her cunt gripping the tip of his cock. He was teasing her, pushing his fat mushroom shaped cockhead through her pussy lips, stretching her apart then pulling back, letting her right pussy close again. He did this repeatedly, dipping just the head of his cock in her juices, feeling the gentle quivering of her pussy, the aftershocks of her first climax. He could feel his own desire growing, his need to fuck her hard and deep, stuffing her full of his cock but he resisted. Andre knew women. Though they don’t have a long refractory period after they come like men, they do need some foreplay to help them rapidly climax again and this is what he is doing, creating a yearning in her pussy, stoking her desire to have his hard cock fucking her, to come from being stuffed full of cockmeat, something she has yet to experience.

Sophia tightened her cunt instinctively the moment she felt a burning hard knob pushed through her cuntal lips, enlarging her pussy channel. It was a sensation her body was craving for. Before it could plunge deeply into her depths though, it was gone, the hardness withdrawing until just the knob could be felt. Sophia almost screamed in frustration, she wants that meat to fill her, stuff her. She wants that cock to ram deep into her so she can feel its entire length. She is hungry for that sensation of fullness. Before she could react though, it was back, but again, it withdrew just as it shallowly probed her hungry hugging hole. Again and again, the burning hot man meat slipped into her greedy pussy and left, stoking the fire between her legs. Finally, desperate to sate her desire, she wrapped her legs around Andre's slim hips, driving his erection fully into her needy cunt until she could feel his ball sac slapping wetly against her bum. Unsatisfied, she started to arch her waist, pushing her pussy downwards each time she tightens her legs to pull him deep into her.

Andre’s eyes glint with the fire of victory when he realized he had succeeded. The little slut is so desperate for him to stuff her full of his meat that she is bucking wildly under him. More than happy to satisfy her, he pulled her legs up, placing them over his shoulders while he got a firm grip of her thighs. Then, he picked up the pace, pounding his hard cock deep inside her pussy as she rocked beneath him. He could feel the girth of his cockhead pushing through the tight squeeze of her sopping wet pussy, and that made him imagine that his cock had swelled to twice its size. The terrible cries of pleasure Sophia is making only served to magnify his enjoyment as he strived hard to fuck her even harder, burying his cock as deeply inside her as possible with every stroke, making obscene noises each time his balls slapped against her butt cheeks.

“Yes! Argh! You’re so biggg!! Yessss! Fuck me! Fuck me! Harder!!” With Andrey's cock deep inside her, stuffing her to the brim, Sophia found herself building rapidly towards her next climax. She felt both sexy and slutty, screaming her joy and pleasure at being fucked by two men at the same time to the world.

While Andre was busy fucking Sophia, Ashley was not idle either. Acknowledging his twin had outmaneuvered him by being the first to fuck Sophia’s pussy, he was busy stroking himself so he could recover his erection quickly. If he was fast enough, there is still yet another move he can pull so he can still achieve a draw.

Sophia’s eyes closed in bliss as Andre continued to pound her from above, content to lose herself in yet another climax, she was surprised when Andre suddenly paused. Swiftly, he let her legs drop and wrapped his arms around her, then rolled her on top of him. Pushing his cock up inside her, his strokes became a lot slower, and not as powerful as before. Sophia was disappointed, she could feel her excitement gradually declining. Before she could do anything to change the situation, however, someone slipped into bed behind her, a familiar voice whispered, “Miss me?”
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this is a nice story!

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Great story, thank you!

Since you asked for feedback I just wanted to share some of my thoughts in an otherwise fantastic story so far: it did get a little confusing at first with the he/she reference for Ashley, and I admit I had to re-read a few paragraphs a few times to get it, but that slowly got ironed out in the later chapters in the plot twist. Also I'm not sure how Ashley cld have been mistaken for a lady, with a male voice etc... but I digress.

Thanks again for the story so far. Great build up, love the regular updates, please keep it coming!
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Great story, thank you!

Since you asked for feedback I just wanted to share some of my thoughts in an otherwise fantastic story so far: it did get a little confusing at first with the he/she reference for Ashley, and I admit I had to re-read a few paragraphs a few times to get it, but that slowly got ironed out in the later chapters in the plot twist. Also I'm not sure how Ashley cld have been mistaken for a lady, with a male voice etc... but I digress.

Thanks again for the story so far. Great build up, love the regular updates, please keep it coming!
Thank you for the feedback bro!

I had originally wanted to explain that in Chapter 4? 5? When they met to discuss how the photo shoot was going. Describing the twins in detail so as to explain how Ashley could have been mistaken for a female but, after much editing (mostly because I’ve never worked in the modeling industry so I’m not confident I can convey a realistic scene) I decided to just cut out the entire thing, leaving just one line to say that Ashley has a soft exotic accent when ‘she’/ he speaks English. I may still put a description of the twins into Chapter 20 so it resolves the confusion in the end, but that really depends on whether I feel it will help develop the plot, or any of the characters or not, so we’ll see.

Thank you once again for your feedback bro! I will work even harder to edit my work so inconsistencies like these don’t creep in too often :-)
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Chapter 9: Sophia's Photoshoot Seduction - Part 5

Ashley? Turning her head around, she could already feel his hard erection between her ass cheeks, probing her gently. No! Not my ass! Frightened, she reached down to get a grip on Ashley’s cock, only to be caught before she could succeed.

“Don’t worry love, I won’t do anything to hurt you.”

“Please, Ashley! No! Anything but my ass! You will tear me wide open! Please!”

“Sshhhh… Trust me…”

Gripping his cock tightly in his fist, Ashley was pushing forward, but not into Sophia’s pussy. He could feel his cockhead bending as it popped into Sophia’s tight cunt, the underside traveling along the slippery length of his brother’s cock.

“Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck!! You bastard! You are tearing me! My pussy is splitting apart! Fuck!! Argh!!!”

Ignoring her tearful screams, Ashley made steady and rapid pace deep into her hot pussy. A woman’s pussy is designed to stretch, and he knows for a fact that even though they are big, both their cocks together cannot compare with the size of a baby. Besides, he is intent on spilling every drop of his sperm into her this time. There is no way in hell Andre can win this round. Coordinating their movements like the old hands they are, the twins began to stroke their cocks in and out of Sophia’s cunt, alternating their movements so one of them will be driving deep into her each time the other is pulling out. The entrance to Sophia’s hole was stretched to its limit, the flesh distended in an obscene manner, in a reverse parody of childbirth.

Despite the terrible pain from the tearing sensation of her entrance, Sophia slowly got used to the sensation of both cocks moving simultaneously inside her. The strokes are not as fast or powerful as she wants, but the sensation of fullness, the pleasure-pain of being stretched to her very limit is slowly driving her nuts. She has never suspected that she might be a masochist before this, but Sophia cannot deny the pleasure she is deriving from this experience; first, cumming from choking as she is mouth fucked, and now this, cumming from being double fucked in her vagina.

Finally, her climax slammed into her, detonating like a nuclear bomb as she screamed her excitement. The heat of her orgasm was devastating as her pussy walls clamped down hard on the cocks inside her, the hot river of her erupting juice gushing over them. Her hips bucked convulsively even as both cocks finally stabbed into her together, unleashing torrents of sperm in return at the sensation of her fiery fluids.

For a moment that seemed like forever, the three of them are locked in place, none of them in a hurry to race each other even as a thick gooey trail of cooling liquid dribbled from the intimate spot they are joined.

Sophia was the first to surface from the mind-blowing climax. She could feel the thick meat of the twin’s cock still inside her. The sperm of the twins are slowly leaving her pussy and she squeezed her cunt walls tighter in an effort to feel the pleasurable sensation of their cockmeat pressing snugly against her inner passage.

The pressure of Sophia’s squeezing pussy, together with the slick fluids lining her pussy was the final move needed for the twins’ softening cocks to pop out of her cunt, unleashing a gush of pussy juice and sperm.

"Oh, my God! This is fantastic." Ashley grinned, looking at the sight in front of him.

"Wha… What?” Sophia murmured.

“Andre! Quick! Before the cum dries!”

Moving out from under her, Andre swiftly picked up his camera while Ashley rushed to get the lighting set.

“You can’t be serious,” Sophia moaned as she finally realized what they are up to. She was lying flat on her front, sperm and whatnot oozing from between her splayed legs, perspiration drying on her back. She’s spent from having cummed so powerfully, the alcohol still coursing through her body.

The twins ignored her murmuring as they tittered and took shot after shot. The velvety river of juice flowing from between her legs a tableau of eroticism fit to raise the clock of the dead. even the light playing against the pearls of sweat of her back look sensual set against her olive skin. When she finally mustered some energy, they quickly coaxed her into some of the most erotic, most wanton poses she has ever made in her life.

Finally, the mess of fluids began to dry and Sophia has enough. She pleaded for them to let her off as she went back to her room to sleep. In her wasted state, it did not take long after she switched off the lights before her eyes began to close. Just as sleep was about to claim her, she felt a lean hard body cover her.

“Again?” She murmured drowsily.

“Ssshhh… You don’t have to do anything this time. Just lie on your belly, I will do the rest.”

Turning to her front, Sophia could feel a pair of hands on her butt cheeks, nudging them apart. She was too tired to resist so she simply laid there as she felt the lips of her pussy and clit being played with. She could feel a pair of hands pleasuring her from behind, together with a hungrily sucking mouth, at times fierce, but most gentle, sending gentle waves of pleasure through her but she was too tired to respond.

The last sensation she remembered was that of a hard cock pushing into her well-lubricated pussy. After that, exhaustion finally claimed her and she fell asleep, lulled to sleep by the familiar rocking sensation of a cock fucking her with long smooth strokes.
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Re: Entrapment

Chapter 10: Sophia - The Morning After

Sophia woke up the next morning with a lean muscular arm wrapped around her. She had a strange taste in her mouth in her mouth she could not place, and there is a tearing soreness from between her legs.

She stretched her right arm in a lethargic manner and reached for her phone. She saw that there were a few missed calls from Shaiful. A squirt of adrenaline suddenly cleared her mind, what time is it? Shit! She shot straight up in her bed and looked at the time. There is no way she will be able to make her flight!

Before she could act, someone hugged her from behind, “Wazzzup beautiful?” Andre drawled lazily. Andre?! What is he doing in her bed? Oh fuck! What did she do last night? She placed her hand on her tender pussy, it feels… stretched. Slowly, fuzzy memories of her sucking and fucking the twins swam into her mind. The memory of that almighty orgasm they gave her with their cocks made her blush. Did I really do that? The slippery wetness between her legs informed her that Andre must have deposited yet another load of cum into her vagina not too long ago. What do I do now?! She could already feel Andre’s cock coming to life, poking the base of her spine as his hands finally began to roam, stroking against her sensitive nipples as he weighed her pendulous breasts in his palms, squeezing and groping them gently.

Hugging Sophia, Andre could guess what’s going on in her mind right now. This is a delicate moment for all of them, either she will come to terms and continue to play ball, or she will make a complete break, making their love-making a one time only event. Andre is not quite ready to let go of the dusky-skinned beauty in his arms yet. It is not often that you come across such an exotic and voluptuous Asian beauty. Most of the models tend to be skinny and, well, with under=developed curves. There is no way he, nor Ashley, will let go of Sophia so soon. At least, not until they had their fun first.

Placing delicate kisses on the nape of her neck, Andre stopped his roaming hands and focused on giving her a reassuring hug. “Don’t worry beautiful. We will pay for a later flight back for you. Just stay a while with us, we will explore the town a bit and have fun yes?”

Sophia heard Andre’s gentle coaxing and knew she should be comforted, but she can’t. There is a nagging terror inside her, at what she had done! She should have listened to her mum and never drank alcohol!

Feeling a slight trepidation at Sophia’s lack of response, Andre decided that more practical measures are needed, “Are we not nice to you baby? Did we not give you the best orgasm you’ve ever had?” between his light kisses, he continued to murmur in her ears, “Give yourself to us beautiful, Ashley and I will make you the next in thing, I promise.”

Andre’s reminder finally worked its magic. She needs to succeed in this line. Besides, Lily had warned her that things like these are inevitable in the industry. So long she plays it smart, this can be a way to advance. It need not be the end if she chooses not to let it end her career.

Feeling her tension ease out of her body as if she leaned back into him, Andre knew she must have decided to come to terms with what happened. He knows this is the right time to play the nice guy card. He fully intends to enjoy her lovely body to the fullest extent, but not now. Not yet. Now is the time to let the line loose a little before they pull it tight again. Little by little, they will reel her in, making her their sex toy, no, their sex slave before they cast her away when they get bored, just like the girls before her.

“Really? You will take good care of me?” Sophia turned her head demurely, looking at Andre’s with innocent, trusting eyes.

Success! Andre exclaimed in his mind as he replied, “Don’t worry baby, Ashley and I will take good care of you.”
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