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Old 15-01-2020, 05:13 AM
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Re: If I am invisible

Looking forward to your next updates to this story TS.
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Re: If I am invisible

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Old 16-01-2020, 05:09 PM
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Re: If I am invisible

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Old 17-01-2020, 01:03 AM
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Episode 26

Ash reached Chris's apartment in that evening. Chris rolled down all the curtains blinds to ensure his apartment was safe to brief the confidential police investigation information.

Chris: Hey Ash, I may lose my job if anyone find out I disclosed these confidential information to you. But heck care since you are my buddy now..

Ash: I will not get you into trouble.. I promise...

Chris: These photos were captured by CCTV at the crime scenes. These two killers wore masks but our police advance technology system identified them. The name of the taller guy is Rock and the other guy is Jason statham.
Both were ex US delta force elite soldiers and fought in wars in the middle east. They were expelled of Delta force for undisclosed reasons and disappeared for 3 years. Then they were seen in middle east, eastern Europe, Africa and US. They were involved in few assassinations of several high rank US governments officers. They were linked with terrorist organizations and international crime syndicate. They were wanted by CIA and interpol for many years. They are highly sophisticated and dangerous criminals. This case was handed to CIA to follow up.


Ash: Damn...CIA and Interpol also can't managed to hunt them.

Chris: I suggested you not to get involved. Your life will be in danger facing these two dangerous criminals. And you may get into trouble with CIA and interpol. Furthermore with all their intelligence and advance technology, CIA couldn't hunt them down...It is mission impossible.

Ash: Then we cannot depend on science and technology to hunt them...they are no ordinary criminals...I need to use non scientific methods...I may need help from one friend whom has strong six senses..

Chris: Incredible....another guy with extraordinary power...I wish you good luck for this impossible mission.

Ash had always maintained close contact with Superintendent Anthony via SBF private messaging. Anthony had not took long annual leaves for many years and he finally agreed to fly over to Detroit after much begging from Ash.

Anthony flied to Detroit Airport in first class flight sponsored by Ash two days later. Ash waited at the arrival hall but Anthony never saw Ash's face before as he was always in invisible mode. Suddenly someone tapped on Ash's shoulder from behind. It was Anthony!

Ash: Not bad, you managed to find me!

Anthony: With my ability...I actually knew your identify from day 1...I just played along you...haha

Ash: WTF...Said earlier la...then I no need to do so much extra efforts to hide my identity! Btw good to see you again buddy!

Anthony: I came here for free holidays....don't put too much hope on me!

They checked into MGM Grand Hotel which Ash was staying and Ash told all the details to Anthony.

Anthony: Wow they are most wanted criminals of CIA and interpol..So the plan was for two Singaporean guys to destroy them for revenge? Interesting...chance of success maybe 0.0001%? Haha

Ash: We are two Singaporean guys with special powers...Bad guys in Singapore are too weak for us....we need a bigger world stage to prove our powers...this is the opportunity now!

Anthony: Just the two of us?

Ash: Have one more partner. He is Detroit police lieutenant Chris Tucker. We can make use of his offical police force channel and combine with our special power. It will be a great team!

Anthony went to the crime scene where Professor Alex was killed and tried to use his sixth senses to investigate. He closed his eyes and focus for 10 mins...



Anthony: University of Michigan is generally safe and no issues except for that major incident hence I'm able to sense and trace back to the specify day of incident...I see two guys with mask walked towards a group of men...the two guys started shooting at them...amazing gun skill...one shot one kill...they departed the crime scene and bumped onto Professor Alex...Professor Alex raised his hands for pardon...the two guys initially ignored Alex, but the taller guy noticed his apple watch.. then returned to kill Alex and took his watch...

Ash: Can you sense the watch design?

Anthony: Red and white...it is Singapore Flag design...That's all I can sense so far...

Ash: Can you try to detect them?

Anthony: Siao...I got sixth senses...not GPS location detector! But I can feel and remember their strong negative and powerful aura..I should be able to sense them if they are near me...

Ash: How far you can sense?

Anthony: As long within my vision I guess?

Ash: OMG..It is still finding needle in the middle of ocean...

Anthony: You think I'm god ah? They can crush me with 1 finger and I can't turn invisible like you to escape...I will not confront them directly...I'm the supporting role...

Ash: Even in invisible mode, I may not be their match too...

Anthony: Hungry now...can we eat first and plan later? Is this the way to treat your overseas friend?

Ash treated Anthony with buffet at MGM grand Detroit hotel for dinner.

Anthony: Bro, I still hungry...how?

Ash: WTF...you almost ate everything here...still hungry?

Anthony: My tummy full but my small bro hungry...understand?

Ash: Ok. I have this problem daily too...haha...go spa ok?

Anthony: Commercial not fun...can I just spot any chio bu on the street then you help me settle?

Ash: WTF...you think I'm god? Never mind...let walk around MGM grand Detroit and try our luck...

They walked around the Casinos, restaurants and entertainment area. They saw many pretty young chicks but didn't caught Anthony's eyes.

Ash: Bro...we saw so many pretty young American babes...none suit your taste tonight?? You are damn picky leh....

Anthony: Yes many pretty young women...but feeling not right...

Ash: Let head to the AXIS lounge for some drinks...last chance to spot our preys tonight...

They had some whiskey at AXIS lounge and there was not much pretty ladies here. Seem they had to continue their search elsewhere.

Anthony: Ok I got feel now...The two ladies at the bar counter...

Ash: Hmm they are not bad...but they looked in late 40s or early 50s...Can find younger chicks or not??

Anthony: Young man like you don't know how to appreciate mature ladies. I confirmed and chopped and guaranteed....I want them!

Ash: Ok....let me turn invisible and get close to them and see what i can do...

Ash immediately turned invisible and stay close to listen their conversations. They actually looked super gorgeous at closed up.

Jennifer - 50 years old, 164cm, C cups, blonde hair, blue eyes
Cameron, 47 years old, B cups, blonde hair, blue eyes


Cameron: It was a rare night out for us. Our husbands not in town tonight and we can party all night!

Jennifer: Cheers to two desperate housewives!

Cameron: It will be perfect if we can have some wild fun tonight...hehe

Jennifer: Yeah...why not? Our husbands play outside with young chicks...they thought we were not aware..we can have own fun as well!

Cameron: Better not to find local American guys in case we might bump onto them next time...tourist is the best...no strings attached...probably will never see them again..hehe

Jennifer: I'll like to try other nationalities dick...only if they are interested in mature ladies like us...

One smart looking Italian guy walked towards them to chat with Jennifer and Cameron. Shit...someone actioned faster than Ash.

Jennifer and Cameron were chatting happily with the Italian guy. Ash walked towards the Italian guy in invisible mode and squeezed his balls hard! That Italian guy screamed in pain and excused himself to rest at one side. Both ladies were amused and laughed loudly. Ash secretly dropped his hotel room card in Jennifer's handbag.

Ash turned visible and walked towards the two gorgeous MILF together with Anthony.

Anthony: Hi ladies, we ordered Johnnie Walker Gold Label and Yamazaki 12. Would like to share your opinions which is the better whiskey. I have a little bet here with this young man on which whiskey will have more votes. The loser will pay the bills.

Ash: Yeah my name is Ash and he's Anthony. We only find the most gorgeous ladies to share our whiskey. Keen for the game?

Cameron: Sure we won't say no to free whiskey unless you guys mind to hang out with older sisters like us! Hehe

Jennifer: My name is Jennifer and she's Cameron. I bet you guys drank too much to come our tables instead of finding other young chicks! Hehe

Anthony: I swear both of you are the most gorgeous ladies here tonight!

Soon they were happily chatting and flirting with each other.

Ash: I can't sleep without both of you tonight...you know why?

Cameron: Oh you horny young man...so what you wish to do with us?

Ash bended toward Jennifer's face and smelled her from close range. Jennifer react with a kiss on Ash's cheek...Ash held Jennifer's hand into her own handbag.

Ash: You see...my hotel card is inside your bag...so how can I return to my room without you?

Jennifer: Oh magician...let waste no time to go into your nest and see more magics...

Prey successfully hooked now. Ash quickly settled the bills and four of them went up to their suites room. The suite room have two king size beds and they shifted two beds together. They didn't wasted much time once entered the room.

Anthony played with Cameron on the left side and Ash played with Jennifer on the right side of bed. Soon all four of them are completely naked after intense foreplay. Cameron began to suck Anthony's erected dick while Ash was licking Jennifer's wet pussy beside. Anthony saw Jennifer's huge melons and bend towards to suck her nipples. Ash also extended his hand towards Cameron's pussy to finger her. It was awesome multi tasking sex orgy!

They enjoyed all kind of sex orgy foreplay patterns for 15 mins. And finally Anthony opened the ceremony with the first penetration inside Cameron's pussy in missionary style.
Cameron bit her mouth and moaned sexily.


Jennifer followed up with ridding on Ash in cowgirl style with her huge melons bouncing up and down nonstop. Anthony stopped banging Cameron...he stand in front of Jennifer's face and fucked her mouth...Ash and Anthony were fucking Jennifer at the same time now!

Only Cameron was free now...and she sat on top of Ash's face for some hot pussy licking session... Next Anthony grabbed Jennifer to one side of the bed to fuck her missionary style.


Ash followed up with doggy style fuck inside Cameron's wet pussy. Both ladies hit climax multiple times and moaned loudly. Ash ramped Cameron from behind furiously and finally he cum inside her pussy.


Anthony on the other side of the bed also busy pumping Jennifer and released his armies inside her pussy.


Anthony was right...Banging hot MILFs was so damn shiok! Ash and Anthony fuck the two MILFs the whole night until they completely ran out of bullets...

Ash and Anthony had fun that night but they remember they still need to continue their revenge mission to hunt down the international criminals Jason and Rock the next day.

Stay tune..
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Old 17-01-2020, 03:56 PM
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Re: If I am invisible

Episode 27

Cameron and Jennifer left the hotel and went home on the next day morning. Ash and Anthony started to brainstorm on their revenge mission to hunt Rock and Jason.

Ash: Anthony, you mentioned your sixth senses can feel their presence if they are nearby..To be precise...within your vision

Anthony: Yes, this is what I believe...I don't know what's the maximum potential that my power can attain...i only use it for minor crime investigation in Singapore...

Ash: I got an idea to test the maximum power of your sixth senses...you willing to try?

Anthony: Yes...as long it will not cause danger to myself and other people..

They went to 73-story Detroit Marriott at the Renaissance Center, which rises 727 feet (222 m) along Detroit's International Riverfront which is the tallest building in Detroit.

Anthony: Nice 360 degree top view of Detroit City. Thanks for the tour guide service! Haha

Ash: No mention. You are here to work...you have the view of entire Detroit City now...Please try to use your sixth senses to detect Rock and Jason.

Anthony: Are you crazy? You think I'm satelite? I mean within my vision...near to me...

Ash: That's what you believe in your own power because you never attempt to break your comfort zone...

Anthony: Wa Lao...Holidays still need to do work...ok I try...to fulfill your curiosity..

Anthony put on his sunglasses and scanned Detroit City from tallest building.



Ash: Did you sense or feel anything?

Anthony: Yes...I feel like shitting now...Heavy breakfast earlier...Haha

Ash: Bro please be serious leh..

Anthony: This is crazy...ok I need to be alone and focus...can you go down and get me Starbucks coffee?

Ash returned after 30 mins with starbuck coffee. Anthony sat on the floor with his face full of sweats...he looked like he just completed 10km of run. Anthony drank the coffee and puked immediately.

Ash: Bro what happened to you?

Anthony: It was the first time I used my sixth senses on such large scale...Feel more tired than running marathon...I think I over exert my energy...help me back to hotel and rest...

Ash: Sorry Bro...It was my fault for the lousy idea...

Anthony: Take this piece of paper...I wrote down the address...Rock and Jason are still in Detroit...Be careful...

Ash: OMG...you make it...damn genius!

Ash helped Anthony back to the hotel for some rest. Next he proceeded to the location which Anthony wrote on the piece of paper. It was at a pharmaceutical factory.

Ash called Police Lieutenant Chris Tucker when he was on the way to the destination.

Ash phoned: Hey Chris, I found the location of Rock and Jason...I'm heading there now...can you send support over?

Chris: WTF...I told you not be involved...they are extremely dangerous criminals...furthermore this case was handed over to CIA...I can't call for operation for this...but I still can bring few of my guys to go down together...You wait for me...don't do silly things on your own...you will be kill by them!

Ash: It's down or never...if they escape today and out of Detroit...we may not able to trace them again...we keep in touch...my phone in vibration mode...call me when you reach..

Ash reached the pharmaceutical factory and turned invisible mode. He decided to sneak inside to recee first. The first floor was the usual administration area and production line which was nothing suspicious. Ash noticed there was one staircase to basement floor and it was guarded by four guys with weapon.

Ash secretly sneaked past them and walked quietly down the staircase. There were another 2 guards at the door in basement. Ash waited for 10 minutes and finally he managed to sneaked inside when one guy opened the door to exit.

Ash was shocked that basement level was actually their armoury with all kind of light and heavy arms. There were only two person here...Yes Ash finally saw Rock and Jason.

Rock was working out at the mini gym area and Jason was practicing striping + assembling of different weapons.



Ash's phone suddenly vibrated and it was Chris who called him. Ash declined the call and took photos of their armoury to WhatsApp Chris.

Ash texted: Look at the weapons...much powerful than police force... First floor is the false shop front...there is a staircase lead to basement...4 guards at the staircase at ground level...2 guards out the door at basement...finally rock and jason inside the room at basement...total 8 targets...all armed with weapons

Chris: WTF...I only had 3 guys + me...I need to call for more support now! Remember don't act on your own first!

Ash headed towards Rock whom killed Professor Alex. He wore that Singapore designed Apple watch to track his heart beat while working out. Ash crunched his fists in anger! Rock was lifting heavy weights.

Finally Ash waited for a good opportunity when Rock did Floor press using heavy weights.

Ash used all his strength and his body weight to press down on the heavy weights. Rock was stunned by the sudden increase of weights...he was struggling and the metal rod was laying on his chest...He struggled to breathe and his face turned pale..

Ash was watching Rock dying...he finally could take revenge for Professor Alex...Suddenly Rock gave a loud shout and pushed the both the heavy weights + Ash away! What an incredible strength beyond human beings!

Jason: WTF you doing rock?

Rock: I don't know...I almost die...something is very strange here...

Meanwhile CIA arrived with Special operation force. They had efficiently took down all the targets discreetly except Rock and Jason inside the room at basement.

Jason: I sensed something not right. There was no response from the guys outside when I intercom them...Let get ready for unexpected battle

Police Lieutenant Chris requested to join the operation to charge inside the basement room with special operation force as he told them he might have a undercop inside as well. All of them camped outside the basement door waiting to break in at the count of 5...4...3...2

Suddenly the basement door opened from inside and a grenade was thrown towards the police force!

Chris shouted: Grenade! Grenade! Grenade! Retreat!

All of the police retreated backwards except for Chris who jumped inside the basement room. The door was closed. And grenade exploded outside. The door was made with special materials that even explosion will not destroy them. And the door can only be open from inside without the key.

Chris looked up and saw the two villains staring at him. Police force shouted at Chris from outside the door that they were trying their best to break the door. Police colleagues asked Chris to hang on first...


Chris: Oh shit...I don't think I can even hang on for 10 seconds...Hi Rock and Jason...you are actually my idols...Our police station have photos of you in many places...


Rock: Jason, how much time we can play with this joker before the bomb explode?

Jason: I set bomb to explode in 10 mins...let set 2 mins to leave via the secret pathway...we have 8 minutes to play with this joker...

Chris: Is not fair man...2 vs 1...

Ash turned visible beside Chris now.

Ash: Buddy I'm here for you...same as you are here for me...it is 2 vs 2!


Rock: Jason let play with them...don't use weapon...

Ash whispered to Chris: I fight Jason....you fight rock...rock is strong but bulky....you keep running around to waste time...don't let him catch you...This is our game plan...

Chris: Rock the pussy cat...I will fight you..let go that side!

Rock: Fuck you...I will kill you with 1 punch

Chris started to run around the big basement room in the factory...and Rock was chasing Chris.

On the other battle with Ash vs Jason Statham.

Jason: Hey chinese guy, show me your best...don't end my fun so fast!

Ash turned invisible and sneaked behind Jason to attack him. Jason closed his eyes and did a reversal taekwondo high kick on Ash's face! Ash was stunned that Jason was able to fight with his eyes closed.

Jason: I was trained to fight blindfolded. I roughly can sense your location based on your footsteps. Your invisible power has little advantage over me.

Ash tried again to attack Jason, but was further whacked by Jason.


Ash realized he got no chance at all in close combat. Ash went to the armoury and randomly grab a gun to fire at Jason. The first shot hit Jason's shoulder but he managed to dodged the subsequent few shots. Jason also fired back and almost headshot Ash. Luckily the bullet only brushed pass Ash's face and cut his face.

Jason: I'm a weapon specialist. As long you fired, I will detect your location and return you few bullets!


On the other battle, Rock eventually managed to catch Chris after few minutes of chasing. Rock punched Chris on his face and slammed Chris on the floor. As a result, Chris fractured his ribs and back. Rock moved forward to give the final attack to end Chris's life.

Bang..Bang..Bang..Ash fired towards Rock..and one of the bullet hit Rock's forehead to kill him. Jason fired towards Ash's direction and hit his arm. Jason looked at his watch and knew he got only two minutes to leave the building before the basement explode.

Jason quickly escaped via the secret path. Ash quickly went over to help Chris...both of them were seriously injured...but they tried their best to ran out of the building via the secret path.

Huge explosion happened in the basement room!! Ash and Chris managed to escape out of the building before the explosion. They would be dead if they were slow by few seconds.

Jason statham was nowhere in sight as he successfully escaped. Chris and Ash were rescued by the police and sent to hospital for treatment.

Battle final results:
1) Ash: Shot in the arm, minor cut in the face, bruises all over his body
2) Chris: Fractured Ribs and back, bruises all over his body
3) Rock: Killed...headshot
4) Jason: Escaped. Shot in the shoulder

Finally Ash managed to revenge for Professor Alex by killing Rock. Chris bluffed the police force by saying Rock was actually shot by Chris, and Ash was just a good civilian that helped police.

Stay tune...
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Re: If I am invisible

Damn good story, keep it up TS
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nice story TS, more updates please.
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Old 22-01-2020, 05:23 PM
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Re: If I am invisible

TS ,, waiting for your update
you went invisible since monday
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TS ,, waiting for your update
you went invisible since monday
invisible hero also needs to do cny shopping & preparation lah... lets just enjoy & wait for updates...
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Very nice story TS, please continue
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Very nice story TS, please continue
Will wait for more updates from him
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Jolly good story, camping for more updates
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really nice story TS, more updates soon please.
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Re: If I am invisible

Episode 28

Victory came with a price...Ash and Police lieutenant Chris were hospitalized for a week. Superintendent Anthony used his sixth sense to locate the runaway criminal Jason Statham but couldn't detect him. It was likely Jason escaped out of Detroit city.

Police lieutenant Chris was rewarded with promotion from Police Lieutenant to Police Captain for his contribution to eliminate international criminal the Rock. Chris will work closely with CIA to hunt Jason Statham.

Ash was discharged from Hospital after a week. Ash and Anthony travelled from Detroit to Cleveland to Pennsylvania to New York City for their own version of hungover trip. They had rented a Ferrari sport car each for the road trip, stay in the best 5 stars hotels, dine at the best restaurants and got plenty of USD cash to splash. They bonked different American babes every night from ordinary working class woman to college SYTs to high end social escorts.




They were certainly having the best time in their life especially for Superintendent Anthony who did not enjoyed a long vacation for many years.

Ash received an unknown international call while he was having fun in New York City. It was a call from Japan and it was LCL who called Ash. Ash owed LCL a favor (from episode 8) and promised to return this favor anytime when she need help. LCL encountered some trouble in Tokyo and she want Ash to fly down to Tokyo immediately to help her. Ash kept his promise and agreed to end his holidays in US and fly to Tokyo the next day.

Anthony tagged along with Ash to Tokyo as he want to see LCL in real person. They arrived at the land of the rising sun on the next day and checked in Peninsula Hotel Tokyo. LCL secretly meet them in their hotel suite.


Ash: Hi LCL, long time no see and you are still so beautiful as ever...I understand you encountered some trouble in Tokyo and need my help. This is my close friend Anthony who is also capable man and might be able to offer his help too.

Anthony: Hi LCL, I can't believed I can see you in real life. Can I touch you? I mean shake your hands...

LCL: Hi guys, indeed i encountered trouble with Yakuza. And I can't depend on police to help me as I fear news will leak and affect my reputation.

Ash: Who is Yakuza?

Anthony: Yakuza also known as gokudō (極道, "the extreme path"), are members of transnational organized crime syndicates originating in Japan. The Japanese police, and media by request of the police, call them bōryokudan (暴力団, "violent groups"), while the yakuza call themselves ninkyō dantai (任侠団体/仁侠団体, "chivalrous organizations"). The English equivalent for the term yakuza is gangster, meaning an individual involved in a Mafia-like criminal organization.

LCL: One of the most powerful leader Kurata was interested in me after I relocate to Japan. His rank is wakagashira (first lieutenant) which is the 2nd in command in the organization. He captured my Japanese Hubby and forced me to take nude photos in exchange for his safety. Kurata want me to serve him willingly once every month...if not he will publish my nude photos to the media and he will keep finding trouble for my husband. I can't afford to offend Yakuza by asking Police to help. Ash I need superhero like you to help me now...please...



Ash: Oh men...we just fought two international criminals in US and I suffered serious injury...Now we face Yakuza which has about 40,000 gang members...LCL I promised to help you with my best ability..

Anthony: LCL you are my 女神...I will help you too...we will not let these japanese mafia bully you...

LCL: Please help me...He ask me to meet him in 3 days time...he threatened to cut off my husband's finger if I fail to turn up...

LCL left their room. Ash and Anthony didn't expect another tough challenge so soon. They spent few hours brainstorming on their plan.

Anthony: We don't know Japanese which is a big barrier...we need someone who know chinese and Japanese for help...

Ash: I goggled...let try this private detective who know Japanese, English and Chinese..

Anthony: No choice...we have less than three days to come out with some mission plan...let go to his office now.

Ash and Anthony went to the private detective office based on his posted location online. It was a shabby small office in a old building. A guy opened the door and welcome them into his office. His name is detective Takeshi. He looked messy and little unprofessional..He smelled of alcohol and seem haven't bathed for days..


Takeshi: Hi both precious client. I'm detective Takeshi. I'm definitely your best choice for private detective as I know Japanese, Chinese and English. What case you need my help? Investigate your wives? Find missing personnel or pets?

Ash: Our friend got into trouble with Yakuza and we need to help her settled her trouble. We cannot involve Japanese Police due to her special identity. We need someone who speak Japanese in our mission.

Takeshi: Wow Yakuza...you must be kidding me...I help you for triple investigation cost...ok?

Ash: Yes, I pay you 50% now and another 50% upon completion of mission. If I'm happy with your service, I will give you another 50% as bonus.

Takeshi: This is my biggest case so far...finally it's time to prove I'm the best detective in the industry...

Can Ash + Superintendent Anthony + Private detective Takeshi capable to take on the infamous Yakuza?


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