A story ten years in the making

[mensammy]

Originally Posted by TheArtist

Hmmm after editing, the emojis went haywire. Is everyone else seeing (?) In place of emojis?

Yes. But it's ok... we get the idea. Thanks for the updates

[TheArtist]

I would like to rewrite certain parts so the story is more cohesive, add more to the action scenes and be more descriptive, then post the entire story from start til now and continue from there. Shall I do that in this thread or start a new thread? Thanks

[spaman7]

Originally Posted by TheArtist

I would like to rewrite certain parts so the story is more cohesive, add more to the action scenes and be more descriptive, then post the entire story from start til now and continue from there. Shall I do that in this thread or start a new thread? Thanks

Tis thread should be fine

[mensammy]

this thread is fine.. Because i bookmarked liao... hahaha

[gasitog54]

Gary arrived. Jane smiled at him adoringly. They walked into the KTV located within the mall and booked the usual small room at the furthest corner. The KTV during the afternoons is usually vacant, and there was lesser staff.

[SquareLife]

Originally Posted by TheArtist

White swimsuit is so sexy!!

[TheArtist]

Originally Posted by SquareLife

White swimsuit is so sexy!!

Yes, it looks so good on her. Just another outfit she wore for other men.

I'm editing and adding to the story, and will post more when this is done. Thanks for the patience.